Eliminating 206 for the best

As much as I liked the idea of using the Stabilizer, 206's role in the story was not jelling for me. 

So far the characters remain:

•Kaza
•Gwenna
•Abe Lincoln 
•Atlantean Sorcerer (TBD)
•Atlantean Commander (TBD)
•Zamundan Military Officer (TBD)



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